Well I've had a few ideas for stories cooking up in the old noggin for a while and I decided to post a brief description of two of them in here for you guys to comment on. If they actually receive decent critiques I might start writing them. (BTW all names are pending)



Immortal Phantom:

This story revolves around a young boy name Scott Myers and his life after death. After deeply wishing not to move on to the next world on the moment of his death, from being struck by a car, Scott became a ghost. He learns the rules of being a ghost from another ghosts calling himself Q, whom he meets soon after death. He learns about how ghosts need to feed on human life energy to keep themselves from fading and how they must always be on the move, lest the shades, shapeless and witless creatures made of pure blackness, find them and feed on them. However Scott tries to stay behind to be with his friend and family and when the Shades find him he finds out that after death, he could very well have become something other than a ghost, or a shade, something completely different.

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Rhythm Breaker (also considering Rhythmic Odyssey):

Due to the heavy incorporation of music in the story I have a hard time imagining this being pulled off without an audio track so it would need to be a flash animation (though I'd personally rather it be anime). This should be a school yard fighting anime such as "Worlds greatest disciple: Kenichi" or "Tenjou Tenge". It would revolve around a freshman school named Kenji Satonaka, who'd just transferred into Erebus High school. He doesn't expect much from the new high school except for the fact that they have a reputable Music club which he wants to become a member of. However, shortly after arriving to the boarding school Kenji is dragged into some sort of underground fighting tournament organized by the student council that essentially decides who is king of the school. Though forced into the fights against his will by his senior in the music club, Yukiko Ashina, Kenji easily wins his first match by seemingly dancing around his opponent (how insulting is that?). And so begins this slap stick comedy about hazardous encounters, questionable friendships and finding the music in any situation.